To make it a better loop try cutting out the intro and outro, don't have it fade in, start at 0:03 end at about 1:14. Just thinking here I'm no expert.
It's worth a try because then it would really be a loop^^ thanks for review!
Just an idea
Do more with the hints of squeaky sounds(0:25), make them resonate more like in 2:11 (maybe an echo). I'm enjoying this but it will depend on my mood while listening to this. I like the very end too but it was hard to make out what was said. maybe put that voice (?) in a bit more.
I don't get the diesel idea
It is a bit quiet, it was kinda nice for the beginning but if you can fix the audio level from 0:40 on to be louder it will have more of an impact. Also if you could change that one sound that starts there into something more rough I'd enjoy it more but its up to you, your work here.
Yeah Those are some good hints. I'll have to rework it... Thank you for reviewing all my stuff!
This almost sounds lullaby-ish. I want to play this until I fall asleep.
Its simple yet nothings lacking, the dynamics fit well too.
I am curious, you say its made with reason, what reason in mind?
Must of have missed this review! Well, I think I'll reply to it anyway even though its eight months old. Thanks man! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Reason is the name of the program I used to make it. Its an extremely good program by the way. As for the reason for making this song, well... guess I'm just a procrastinating nerd that doesn't want to put time into something useful, so I write songs instead. :)
I think its catchy, but not done yet.
But it feels like it needs something. Maybe some heavier bass. Depends on what your looking for it to sound like. You got the background, now you need something else going on, a melody. something that keeps changing over time. Maybe some of what I call scaling... where the notes go up and down. Hard to explain it but think of .. driving over a road with a lot of hills. Right now its just a straight road, maybe with some curves but now it needs those hills to add depth to the feeling of the song.
You know, this is actually the first song I've even remotely considered revisiting. And I would, If I actually still felt this way. I make songs as an expression. And since this time, things have gotten better.
But damnit, I like what I have here so far, and I know I could do this like, 10 times better if I sat down and worked on it.
I'll take this under advisement. Thank you for the input
I think I'm addicted
I can't stop listening to this, it put me in a good mood. Trust me 8 is a good score from me I try to rate fairly.
Glad you like it. Thanks for leaving a comment
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